Your hand enclosed in mine
As slowly we stroll
Being here next to you
Warms my very soul
I glance towards you
And drink in your beauty
I value you just like
A pirate loves his booty
Your hazel eyes stare into me
They shatter all my walls
The pieces plummet all around
As the infrastructure falls
A gust of wind whispers
Your red locks dance in the breeze
The emotions you invoke
Nearly bring me to my knees
Your pale white skin
Glows in the sunlight
Just being here with you
Makes everything feel right
Our love has had its ups and downs
Like every love will
But not every love comes
With this undeniable thrill
Til death do us part
Was my promise to you
I meant every word
When I said I do
Other Unshitty™ Romantic Monday posts:
Hastywords – Sea Of Bodies
Still Light – In Reveal
My Addicted Obsession – Still She Loves Me
Think.Speak.Tryst – Reflection of Me
GingerSnaap – My Lover’s Arms
Start With Your Pen – I Am So Selfish
PsychedelicAbyss – Ecstacy
Shackled and Crowned – Lucky Woman
K8edid – Shift Change
Rowmantic – Tears Don’t Freeze
FortyOneTeen – Once More
Just Momentarily – Eye Contact
My Thoughts On The Subject Are As Follows – Join Me
Lyrical Anarchy – How I Feel About You Sometimes
Hastywords – Whispering Twilight
Polysyllabic Profundities – A Piece Of Her Heart
Sage Doyle – Everything
Edward Hotspur – Next
Pressimist – The Versatility of John Sullivan
My Side Of Paradise – I’ll Take Care Of You, If You Ask Me To
The Lucky Girl – A Little Bit Of Sunshine
Think.Speak.Tryst – Forevermore
“I value you just like
A pirate loves his booty”
This is my favorite thing for the week.
Ha! Glad I will be a part of your week.
That last paragraph is pure romance. I loved this!
Thank you.
This is breathtaking.
Thank you.
Twindaddy, I love this so much. It’s so perfect
Thank you!
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Twin, this says it all…perfect. You must have been very hot in that Storm Trooper suit writing this heart melting message.
It’s always hot in here.
You really are a big softie under all that armor! What a touching poem – she’s a lucky girl.
I have my moments.
And many of them, I’m sure.
Probably not enough.
Keep writing poems for her….it would work for me.
I’ll try.
You’re off to a good start….that poem was beautiful.
Thank you.
And I see congratulations are in order. A sainted Le Trooper….what next? Do we have to name a constellation after you?
Perhaps so. I wouldn’t mind my name being written in the stars.
Better than the snow, I guess.
Well, yeah. Snow melts. Duh.
I wonder if we can find a cluster of stars that look like a helmet?
We could imagine it.
Next time I’m on the deck and it’s a clear night, I’ll be sure to look!! I’m gonna laugh my ass off if I see it.
Pics, or it didn’t happen.
I’m on a mission now….I may need to borrow a telescope from some science nerd.
Or a camera with an incredibly huge lens.
*WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO* Hot damn, that was amazeBallssss!
I’m going to take that as a compliment, even though I’m not entirely sure it was.
OF COURSE IT WAS A COMPLIMENT, YOU DAFT STORM TROOPER! Now look what you did, you made me yell!
This was lovely and brilliant and now I wanna kiss your Mrs, ALOT!! *WOOOOHOOOOOO*
LMAO. Did you forget your medicine this morning?
NO! I was merely delayed in taking it! Hmph.
I blame CrossFit for *today’s* moodiness- it’s the gym from HELL. They’re all assholes there and work for satan! Tomorrow’s moodiness will be blamed on you, watch out.
That’s okay. I don’t have to deal with it.
I love you babe!!
Thank you so much for the pingback.
You’re quite welcome.
Great blog, by the way.
Thank you!!
Love love love love love love love…oh and one more….love.
Thank you, Hasty. That truly means a lot coming from you.
I was going to ask if your subject is aware she is your muse, but then I read the comments. Aaaand…I agree with Jen and Tonic; that last stanza is magic.
She is aware…and thank you.
Yup. I saw that. I only know of one Superbitch, and since you responded with kindness and not the blaster, I figured it was the actual her.
Yeah, she’s not really a bitch at all. I’m not quite sure why she picked that moniker.
Probably because Wonder Woman was already taken.
Could be.
Awww, you ole softie!
Shhhhhh…..don’t tell anyone.
Aww this is really sweet! Damn I wish someone would write me a poem! There’s no good poets left in the world.
Ehm I mean, besides you.
Lol, thank you kindly, madam. I’m sure one day you will find somebody…wait…aren’t you already married? I’m confused.
Lol yes I am…but he’s not a poet. Haha!
Oh…maybe he could plagiarize one for you?
Ooo good idea. Nothing is more romantic than me forcing someone to write an already written poem for me.
Team work!
It’s the thought that counts, right? Right?
Your words are stunning! I am thankful to be included in your list.
Why, thank you madam.
Why oh why has it taken so long for me to find your writing!?! I really love this piece! I will be reading more of you.. ~ Jen. Oh, and thank you very much for the mention! I am quite honored!!
Why, thank you! And I have no idea!