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Fist strikes
Powerful lightning
Fear invoked
Quite frightening
Epithets clap
Rolling thunder
Heart shattered
Is it any wonder?
Emotions swirl
Tornadic winds
Destroying all
Unforgiving sins
Tears pour down
Torrential rain
Clouded vision
Unbearable pain
Storm passes
At an end
Destruction left
Cannot mend
Cannot believe
Havoc wreaked
No memory
Completely freaked
Sorrow felt
Burning shame
Uncontrolled
Heart aflame
Seems it was a poetic day. Nicely done, very powerful.
Thank you.
that was amazing ~ WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED??
Um…I wrote a poem?
The events that inspired them must have been quite SOMETHING
Not really. I was just thinking about how when you get angry it’s kinda like a storm. It hits, you’re not sure what the hell’s happening, and when it’s over you’re just kinda dumbfounded.
That was a great piece of poetry ~
Thank you very much.
You’re welcome.. I don’t often say this out loud b/c I don’t want to be offensive -but I’m sometimes not always a poetry fan…it just depends. But I’ve read some really great works on people’s blog.
I am horrified to listen to people reading poetry – I would rather read it in my mind with my own mind-voice
Is that rude?
Nope. We each have a preferences. I’m not always in the mood for poetry. I have to be in a certain frame of mind to either read it or write it. Honestly, I enjoy writing it much more than I do reading it. I guess I’m just weird that way.
I like a good naughty limerick any time of the day, however!
Hmmm…I’ll see if I can come up with something for you then.
Wonderful, twindaddy. Like she said up there ^, powerful. It’s so cool how a storm is much like our emotions.
I don’t know if it’s cool or not, but it’s pretty true to me.
Sounds like a typical Saturday night and following Sunday morning.
You have a temper? I would never have guessed.
Only in solitude.
Sometimes it’s good to let it all out. Release all the pent up energy. Sometimes it’s cleansing. If done in a healthy way.
Like wall sliding while letting out a big old “UGHHHH”.
Yeah, like that. Not that I can do that. Well, not without hurting myself.
Wear your hard hat. Haven’t I taught you anything?
I honestly get confused by you sometimes…
I’m an illusion.
It all makes sense now.
On a serious note, it’s nice to see a different side….
Thanks.
Glad to read in the earlier comments that this was a description and not a tell all. Well written, TwinDaddy.
No, I’ve never struck anyone in anger. Well, not since I was a child and hit my brother that one time…
I know from personal experience that brothers often deserve it. Sisters? Sisters are perfectly reasonable at all times. Or I was.
Of course they are. Also, I wouldn’t know since I don’t have one.
Powerful words, Twindaddy
I have my moments.
Anger is a bitch mistress that’s hard to get rid of sometimes.
Yes, it is.
Gorgeous, powerful work!
Thanks!
Really expresses all those emotions we get when we’re angry. Great!
Thanks.
Cooool. I didn’t realize you were also a poet? Fucking badass banner by the way! How’d you do that?
Gotta a program the does it. Wanna banner?
Um, that would be killer!
Let me know when you get a name and I’ll make one.
Sweet, thanks man! I’ll let ya know for sure. Are there a lot of different fonts availble?
I can it in any font you can find.
Awesome, that’s all.
And you blow me away, yet again!! There is a reason why I keep my favorite friends & writers in my in box… even when I fall behind in my social worlds, I like to come back and read you!! This is great. I like the flow, and what it made me feel. So good TD!!
Thank you!